b) I AM SO NOT WRITING A FIVE-PERSON ORGY, THAT IS TOO MANY PEOPLE
except maybe if it were in broad crack strokes, like about how overwhelming it is to Ian even though he's totally practiced at this, and how different it is with these guys, with Zack pulling Ian onto his lap while Brendon blows Ian, and how Spencer's staring at Brendon's mouth--maybe Ian's cock too, but definitely mostly Brendon's mouth, everyone can tell that--like it's an oasis in the desert. And he can't even spare a thought for what Dallon's doing, fisting his dick and watching Brendon, too, they're kind of all watching Brendon, because Brendon is kind of putting on a fucking show, naked and bobbing and moaning louder than he sings, even, and the vibrations are driving Ian fucking wild but Zack's holding him steady, keeping him from shaking right off the bed ...
Re: CRACK DOES NOT GET A TITLE, 1/1, Panic 3.0 GSF
except maybe if it were in broad crack strokes, like about how overwhelming it is to Ian even though he's totally practiced at this, and how different it is with these guys, with Zack pulling Ian onto his lap while Brendon blows Ian, and how Spencer's staring at Brendon's mouth--maybe Ian's cock too, but definitely mostly Brendon's mouth, everyone can tell that--like it's an oasis in the desert. And he can't even spare a thought for what Dallon's doing, fisting his dick and watching Brendon, too, they're kind of all watching Brendon, because Brendon is kind of putting on a fucking show, naked and bobbing and moaning louder than he sings, even, and the vibrations are driving Ian fucking wild but Zack's holding him steady, keeping him from shaking right off the bed ...
NOPE TOO MUCH